About Growing Up
Reflection of The Missing Piece
After reading this short story, I think we should do things on our own as possible as we can, and be brave enough. During growing, we come across many problems, and we have to tackle these by ourselves. Nothing cannot be solved as long as we work hard and have patient on it. So in short, I feel this story is a kind of good one and tell people how to take this easy.
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Hey!
I agree with your opinion.
By the way, you do a good job.
Ha Ha, I am Winni.
I agree your opinion,too.
We must be brave while we face all the problems, right?
If we are not encourage, no matter how small the problen is, we can not solve them!!
hey hey
i am coming and my name is Mandy.
Through my reading about your story, i think i can find two mistakes.
First, i remember my senior high school teacher told us that "as possible as we can" can't put together.They are the same meaning and they should be separated like "as ...as possible" or "as...as you can."
According to my memory, i think maybe i am right.HA HA!!
And the other mistake is i suppose that "so" and "in short" maybe can't be together.I think they are the same meaning in English.
The aboved-mention are what i just found.
But i think your story is a little short that can't attract others interesting.You must write more and think more.
Anyway, you did well on the whole.
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